Death Dealing

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by The Elemental Dragon (queen of dragons) on Thursday, 08-Mar-2007 21:38:03

I really need to stop riting these things wen I'm bored in class This is the favorite thing I have written so far.

Death Dealing
By
Ashley Gorzelany

I am Wind, I am Water, I am earth, I am flame,
I am life, that is all I am and ever will be,

Darkness is rising,
Death is calling to me,
I` am a slave to him,
Life, free and untamed,

I am Wind, I am Water, I am earth, I am flame,
I am life, that is all I am and ever will be,

Light washes darkness away,
Darkness banishes all light,
Wind whispers in an ear,
Water churns under foot,
Earth is always changing,
But fire is Free and will never be enslaved

I am Wind, I am Water, I am earth, I am flame,
I am life, that is all I am and ever will be,

Death calls to me,
I am flame,
The creator and destroyer,
I belong to no one,
I am the living essence of life,

I am Wind, I am Water, I am earth, I am flame,
I am life, that is all I am and ever will be,

Post 2 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Saturday, 10-Mar-2007 1:06:08

Ashly,
If you write this well bored I shrutter to think how magnificent your writing if inspired.smile
Connie ~ Grace

Coming to terms and where points of life/death meets
the emphasis here is on Flames..the drawing out of them in all their aliveness/creativity as well as in death an aliveness being found.. an aliveness to death
...I can not help but to consider that if Water were to have more of an emphasis, then with the Flames.. a scorching steam perhaps..??

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 14-Mar-2007 11:19:47

You really need to find yourself an agent and soon. Smile